hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 43,772 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

No Preacher - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

With dirt’s accumulation in heart
You can never think of goodness as an art
Even if you try for it, it will have no meaning
At no stage you will be winning

Try to be no preacher
If you have nothing to offer
Even good teacher has to learn
At each point with decisive turn

People rush for giving advice
They have no sure device
They offer as have nothing to lose
But often choose word carefully

No one is perfect
Yet it is imperfect
To act in a manner
As preacher

Polite words may create effect
It may earn honor with act
People may find some solace
As it has some truth with trace

So seek and render
If that is wanted even by reader
Anybody can write anything
But it must have logic behind to offer something


Comments about No Preacher by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    Lisa Lombardi Sincerity with analysis is always an explosive combination, that shall act like a detonator in such situation. Last line, ur style. Poetically very well message conveyed! ! !
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome Maricela Ramírez, Shujat Ahmad like this.
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  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 10:03:00 PM)

    A great and wonderful poem

    David Stephens5 minutes ago
    you are a great writerI enjoyed this poem (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 43,772 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (4/12/2014 5:45:00 PM)

    With dirt’s accumulation in heart
    You can never think of goodness as an art (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, April 12, 2014



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