Nonsense Rhymes: Feeling Blue Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Nonsense Rhymes: Feeling Blue

Rating: 5.0


Dear friends, what do you do?
When you feel down and blue?

I, for one of those precious few,
Fail to find a plausible clue,
So, I choose to silently chew,
Paan masala, one or two!

Do you do the same, too?
Or you would rather like to eschew
Making an answer from this cue,
And tell me something entirely new?

When sometimes I am down and blue,
I guess I want to again walk through
The memory lanes, old and new,
And engage myself, through and through.

I love to look out and have a view
Of the skies above, white and blue,
And marvel at their celestial hue,
From that fancied flight my dreams ensue.

Well, this indeed is my maiden debut,
In trying to make a soft break through,
Not to seek any accolade or to woo
You or others for an admiration undue.

I know this to be indeed true,
‘Twas just a fun, and not an interview,
Asking you as to what you do,
If and when you feel horribly blue!

Come on folks, do not pooh-pooh,
My humble verses which I construe
To be nonsense rhymes brought to you,
With this, may I say, adieu, adieu! ! !

Melbourne, Australia
28 February 2020

Friday, February 28, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: satire
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 14 September 2020

Well, this indeed is my maiden debut, In trying to make a soft break through, Not to seek any accolade or to woo You or others for an admiration undue. This is a poem I much enjoyed! You have kept a beautifully and spontaneously rhyming flow through out the poem. Here the effort is not labored, but natural....! You deserve great accolades for this remarkable stream of thoughts! 10+++

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2020

Thanks, dear poet Valsa, for a very inspiring appraisal of the poem and a generous rating of 10++. Much appreciate the kind comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 07 March 2020

Come on folks! ! ! Poetry is the key; Musing along. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2020

Poetry is the key; Musing along. Well said, @Edward Kofi Louis. Thanks for the comment.

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Akhtar Jawad 06 March 2020

Enjoyed the fun of this beautiful poem.

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Khairul Ahsan 20 October 2020

Thank you, dear poet Akhtar Jawad, for visiting and appreciating the fun of the poem. Much inspired by your comment.

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