(3rd April 19sixty / Tikapali, Patnagarh, Balangir, Odisha, India)

What do you think this poem is about?

Not concrete

Abstract
And not concrete
Memory instant
Effort diminished
Arousing alarm.

What to say
About organs
Center demolished
In a night
Moon cried panic.

Meaning not sure
Yet all went
In limited sky
Water not managed
Total blundered.

Submitted: Friday, February 22, 2013
Edited: Saturday, February 23, 2013


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  • Alexander Coppedge (2/22/2013 7:50:00 AM)

    Interesting stlye and concept for a poem I like the mix

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