Not Really Interested.. Poem by Indira Renganathan

Not Really Interested..

Rating: 4.8


Look, you are the cuckoo of the season
Me a cuckoo awaiting the season
Oh gone earner, cooing from too far you're
Me, waiting to be with you for ever

Oh my love, you are the bird seasonal
But me, just want our family seasoned
Missing you we all beg you to return
N R I? or for our joy you'll return?

Sunday, July 8, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: life,social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 20 July 2018

A heart touching poem. Truly it touched my heart. I could feel the void felt by an awaiting cuckoo whose partner has gone too far away to earn their bread. And she waits indefinitely......

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 July 2018

The review made by dearest apt poetess Valsa George is adorable and justified. You have delineated the picture of a present family in crucial situation vividly through a cuckoo. Beautiful metaphorical poem amazingly shared.

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Valsa George 09 July 2018

It is unfortunate that a family gets divided when a partner goes to work abroad! Some are compelled to do so to make a living. This they can't help! But those who stay apart in the quest for making money and more money do great harm to the integrity of the family, How long a cuckoo can sit lonely and sing? You have brought in a crucial situation affecting the modern families!

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