hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 35,580 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Nothing To Fight - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Nothing to fight
Under naked night
It is much to delight
And feel right

The silvery light
All objects are in sight
But you appear calm
Floating in realm

I wish
For night not to finish
As for the first time
She is with no dearth of time

I look at
And think of fate
How lucky am I?
To watch with naked eyes

She is within grasp
I smile and clap
She just hides face
I close the eye to find the trace


Comments about Nothing To Fight by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM)

    doesnt suond untrue


    someone noone4 minutes ago
    sounds in view
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  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:18:00 PM)

    It's a good poem but it could be improved


    Ella Mae2 minutes ago
    I think it's a good poem, however I think you need to create more imagery and make the poem flow a little more. The rhyming seems like you have tried to base the whole line on the word, which doesn't make the poem flow as easily. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 35,580 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/7/2014 8:53:00 PM)

    Nothing to fight
    Under naked night (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, August 7, 2014



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