Nothing To Grieve About Poem by Maya Hershey

Nothing To Grieve About

Rating: 5.0


There's Nothing to Grieve about
for this haze, you can't see.
Look at me and tell me
what is it we come to seek.
For reasons, I give you one,
The color of souls that shine so deep.
Engulf my feelings and swallow my pain,
for all it's sorrow you keep.
Show me how I could be
the heart of one that feels relief.
Show me how I could live,
to see the day that strains belief.
All I want is your true love,
so that I could learn to release.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Afzal Shauq 30 May 2009

again a very sweet, realistic and perfectly done poem... flow is very much poetic..idea is logical, plea is interesting.. the composition of words is rich..means..you are a very good poet and you have full comand to do more good poems too.. talented and fair friend with kind heart and rich brain..respect your comments..best of luck 10 ++++++++++++

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~ Jon London ~ 01 April 2009

A bloom of loving words, nice penning

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Yvonne Selase 01 April 2009

beautiful poem. nicely written

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