Oh how salty my tears are,
when they travel so very far,
when taking this pace from eye to cheek,
I hope they fall everytime I speak.
I'm so alone, never much blessed.
Now I cry, again I messed.
My cheeks are wet,
My face is sore,
soon they'll dry and I'll be set,
until my eyes can't throw no more.
Then I'll beg them to just spread,
my tears to make a promise torn.
Waiting for days with shiny skies,
and white wings spread so high,
Oh, how salty my tears are,
don't be shy to leave a scar,
I'll wait, don't care if forever,
farewell my fallen tears, we lie together...
so pathetic piece though its melancholic traits overcome its pessimistic ones, one collapses in floods of tears whilst reading, written sedately and eloquently.
wow so great poem with sweet and rich idea..the composition of your poem is very good heart feeling..and i found some how innovation in your ideas..specially in this poem..you are a good poet and hope you never stop writing..I am basically a peace wisher poet with 6 books and your comments will be added to my new book sure... respect your words and kindness being a good poetry friend.. you are a good poet..and I mean it that you are..10+++
hornestly every time i read any of your poems i just cant believe how nice they sound to me. they sound like one of those poems written by one of those great poets from long ago, the kind we have to study in school today. you are sooo talented. pls dont stop writting
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like the last stanza: ''Oh, how salty my tears are, don't be shy to leave a scar, I'll wait, don't care if forever, farewell my fallen tears, we lie together... '' well written sad lyric poem.....touching..........10+++