now that you're gone
i feel as if my path has become clear
now that you're gone
i feel that i can finally breathe
now that you're gone
i can spread my wings and fly
now that you're gone
my world has entirely changed
now that you're gone
i finally realized that i never needed you here
and that you were only in my way
very optimistic and refreshing. It is obvious that you put alot of effot and heart in such a poem. :)
very nice.... keep up the good work 10/10 thanks for sharing.
Ah, finally you've grown up...all of us have passed through this stage...but you 'poemed' it naturally. And stay calm inside too.... Cheers. Subroto
Just keep writing my, friend. You can always revise them when some rhyme strikes you
Good self expressive poetry. Keep it up. I think my 'Love Affair' can help you a little. CP
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
it 's amazing it may takes the breath away with it delicacy