Thinking About You Poem by 3MI LIANA

Thinking About You

Rating: 2.4


waking up in bed
feeling old and stressed
not wanting to face the world
but just thinking of you
makes me have strenght

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emily Oldham 09 May 2009

i can relate to this one... nice poem. Keep writing, thanks Athena *** words will change the world ***

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Subroto Chatterjee 04 May 2009

Well, good for you. Now, get moving on with that strength of yours...Lucky you have such people around to inspire you. And on....! ! Cheers. Subroto

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Tony Fiona 24 April 2009

easy to understand... don't worry about not rhyming. strong writing over comes nearly everything waking up in bed feeling old and stressed not wanting to face the world just thinking of you gives me strength Tony

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Juneil Sechico 20 April 2009

nice piece...very expressive and easy to pick the message....

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ata khan 18 April 2009

Very sweet and beautiful, Some people are meant only for you in life, they bring twinkle to our eyes and joy to out souls Good one Liana thanks for sharing

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