O my Captain, give me a chance
I will make you my focal point
and allow you to rule my life.
O my Captain, I am for you
and you be with me forever
my journey will become sojourn.
O my Captain, give courage and hope
and become my ally
look into my eyes, and shut the world.
Brilliant write! Enjoyed reading very much, written with great style!
A well crafted thought provoking poem. Very interesting closure lines to ponder about.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Our minds control our lives, for better or worse.