O My Captain! Poem by M. Asim Nehal

O My Captain!

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O my Captain, give me a chance
I will make you my focal point
and allow you to rule my life.

O my Captain, I am for you
and you be with me forever
my journey will become sojourn.

O my Captain, give courage and hope
and become my ally
look into my eyes, and shut the world.

Tuesday, February 9, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David Wood 09 February 2021

Our minds control our lives, for better or worse.

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Brian Jani 10 February 2021

Yes Captaun, read my poem

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Captain Cur 09 February 2021

Brilliant write! Enjoyed reading very much, written with great style!

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me poet yeps poet 09 February 2021

you don't need captains you already are one MAN

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 February 2021

A well crafted thought provoking poem. Very interesting closure lines to ponder about.

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Kostas Lagos 09 February 2021

Excellent poem! A really wonderful piece of poetry

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