Oakland Lake Poem by John F. McCullagh

Oakland Lake

Rating: 5.0


The sunlight, like a mother’s touch,
lies gentle on the water’s face.
The last warm breath of summer past
Not ready yet to yield its place


And you and I walk, hand in hand,
Around the long and winding path
Past where fledging Mallards stand
And weeping willows sweep the earth.


From beyond the rushes comes
the soulful melody of a horn..
All else is still, no sound intrudes
upon the bassist and his song..


Above us Ninja squirrels fly
And bomb the path with acorn shells
If they should hit me do not laugh
Odds are that they’ll get you as well.

I’m glad we came to Oakland Lake,
To watch the waterfowl at play,
And have a quiet conversation
about a nearly perfect day.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rex Mathew Mathew 02 November 2009

Lovely. The deep and wonderful images of nature is enough to impress one. It complements the emotion and bond that you share with your ' you', whoever may it be, your wife or your lover or just your friend. Overall, a brilliant poem coloured with impressive imagination.

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Abbey Rigney 26 October 2009

I really enjoyed reading this... Your writing is so imaginable, but yet far fetched. Very nice :)

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