Michelle Claus

Ocean - Poem by Michelle Claus

lashing the rocks
sculpting my savage coast
where vagrant seagulls loiter and perch …
Earth submits to you as a grain of sand,
and to your motion I cast
the cadence of my thoughts.

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Topic(s) of this poem: ocean

Comments about Ocean by Michelle Claus

  • Gold Star - 19,633 Points Dr.tony Brahmin (9/25/2015 10:39:00 AM)

    a very nice potrayal of the ocean and the rocks and seagulls, water lashing the rocks. a great job. thank you (Report) Reply

    Veteran Poet - 1,118 Points Michelle Claus (9/25/2015 10:44:00 AM)

    Thank you for your kind comment

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  • Silver Star - 4,474 Points Clarence Prince (1/25/2015 2:48:00 PM)

    A lovely job! Well done Michelle! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 14,961 Points Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/26/2014 11:35:00 PM)

    You presented vast ocean on your palm so lucidly, I am mystified. Great! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 92 Points PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE (8/5/2014 11:52:00 PM)

    thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 399 Points Kirti Sharma (6/25/2014 1:57:00 AM)

    beautiful poem...
    i like it! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 415 Points Captain Cur (6/19/2014 3:08:00 PM)

    Passion and senuality sculpt this savage piece. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 30,520 Points Sandra Feldman (6/14/2014 11:48:00 PM)

    You have captured the essence of the ocean with great imagery but above all this magnificent poem conveys the feeling, grandeur and mystery that the sea provokes. Now, thanks to you I can see and feel the sea again.and join the vagrant seagulls there.

    A true pearl of a poem, to be cherished (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,814 Points Mr. Agape (6/14/2014 11:13:00 PM)

    Indeed! While with the sea
    we learn to let her weave us (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 69,929 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/14/2014 11:12:00 PM)

    very fine, I like it, thanks. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 14, 2014

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