Ocean Days Poem by Claire Hunter

Ocean Days

Rating: 5.0


Hear the wind and the breeze
Enjoy the warmth of the sun and the sand
Relish in the coolness of the water
Feel the burn as the sun tans your skin
And the wet sand beneath your feet
The tangles in your hair
The salt in your eyes
Whimpers of the small children
The ocean

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Adrian Cordova 17 April 2010

You pay much attention to detail, you see and hear much more then most people and for that your work will excel.

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sky dreams 20 April 2009

beautiful imagery 10

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