October Ballad Poem by Marton Dezso

October Ballad

Rating: 3.1


where is the child where is the father
where does weep the mourning mother
where does she walk where does she sleep
will her eyes the others' ever seek?

what if she wakes into life again
what is then earth and under what heaven?
what is that life and what was the other
where is your child where is his father.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

a sad touching poem..well said

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Indira Renganathan 12 February 2010

Poetic questioning on a sad incident....makes the reader feel for the mother....as well the child and the father.....nice reading...thank you

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 12 October 2009

nice rhyming and assonance. It is very good to combine different patterns in poetry! very well penned!

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Rachel Butler 09 October 2009

where is the child where is the father Rachel Ann Butler

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Marieta Maglas 08 October 2009

well written poem, good questions, lovely to read...........

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Afzal Shauq 08 October 2009

what if she wakes into life again what is then earth and under what heaven? what is that life and what was the other where is your child where is his father. what a sweet write in questioning way and the reality is kept in view.. the idea and the expression is very much sweeet and interesting..I really liked it..well done 10/10

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