Treasure Island

vaibhav shah

(07-12-1984 / Dungarpur (Rajasthan))

Ode To Moon


Ah! Mysterious Moon!
Why do you come every night
And spread your cool dim light?
Your beauty is for us a consecration
That provides us with contemplation
Are you really a concrete substance
Or merely an illusion to satisfy our glance?


Ah! Wonderful Warrior!
You attract us always from your speed
And sometimes from your noble deed
Superior to stars and inferior to sun
Among so many forces you are the one
Do you tend to make us always realize
God made you to grant nature a prize?

14-3-2008

Submitted: Friday, March 14, 2008

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  • C. P. Sharma (5/21/2008 9:12:00 AM)

    You provide a ne dimension to look at the moon. Traditionally:

    Moon is meant for children's delight,
    Moon is for love's fancy flight,
    On moonlit nights there is love tide,
    Moon stands for enchanting bride.

    Moon cols down an agitated mind,
    It provides you the peace of mind. (Report) Reply

  • Deepti Agarwal (4/22/2008 2:48:00 AM)

    gone thru many poems for THE MOON....
    this one is cool...especially the last line..it did all the wonders... :) (Report) Reply

  • Seema Chowdhury (3/17/2008 12:41:00 AM)

    hi Vaibah, its a good poem, very nicely it expresses your feelings. always remember the one that comes from the heart always touches the heart. just keep on writing and make sure your poetry will touch it highest level only when it will have a touch of sincerity and purity. take care and enjoy your poetic life.
    seema (Report) Reply

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