Old Wound Poem by Chen-ou Liu

Old Wound



A Tanka Prose


standing still
on the opposite shores
of the Pacific
in a dream...
youthful Mother and aging me

When I was young, homesickness was a long cable line:
me on one end, Mother on the other.
When I grew up, homesickness was a three-sheet letter:
an hour’s labor, written and folded with care.
But later on, homesickness was reduced to $3 plus tax:
a seasonal greeting card.
Now, homesickness is a surging sea:
me in this Promised Land, Mother on a crowded island.

drifting in a dream
turned into a bird
flying over the Pacific -
I open my eyes
upon darkness again

Friday, April 3, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: dream,homesick,mother,nostalgia
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ging Taping 10 September 2016

simp! e easy to read but touching wow perfect!

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Kelly Kurt 03 April 2015

Wonderful writing, Chenou. I really liked this poem!

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