One day in my friend’s house I slept there,
On a wooden ataman I slept in proper care.
Owing to a long journey I did get asleep,
Obnoxiously I got a nightmare in mind deep.
Obscurantism was going on among the people,
Obsequiously some were remaining in simple.
Obscure was their argument I did feel bitter,
Obstructive mind wasn’t good I thought better.
Outbreak and outburst came out soon,
Outcry ran speedily it was then noon.
Out and way commotion was critical,
Overawing mind showed as it was practical.
‘Oh’ I said and I did get up from sleep,
Overturn I felt ‘earthquake’ heard from lip.
Oppressive flood, I saw, took many lives,
Opposition among people had sword and knives.
Owl hooted, dog barked, and cat did mew,
Ominous omens are these I thought Age is due.
Oh! My nightmare broke down and I came to know,
Overthrow of Confluence Age is coming let’s owe.
Owl hooted, dog barked, and cat did mew, Ominous omens are these I thought Age is due. Oh! My nightmare broke down and I came to know, Overthrow of Confluence Age is coming let’s owe. Kumarmani Mahakul, only Kumarmani Mahakul can think so much and can covert his thoughts in such a thoughtful poem.........10
Such nightmares may be the indication of the onset of some disastrous events! It is believed that howls hoot, wolves howl and dogs bark just before the outbreak of an earthquake or a tsunami.... as animals are more sensitive to Nature's changes! Great write!
OW! only O-s in the beginning! ! ! I love these OU sound. want to reread the poem! magnificent!
picture of laura loveheart xA clever piece, tfs, [3 10 Sep 2015 by laura loveheart | Reply picture of Ramin Ara xLovely Sir. 10 Sep 2015 by Ramin Ara | Reply picture of Jane Taylor Hardy xAmazing writing Kumarmani! Thank you so much for sharing! 11 Sep 2015 by Jane Taylor Hardy | Reply picture of antonio liao x...lure to interpret dream of mine, so fascinating and clever that dream have open the sky of wisdom; worth to remembered the past dream and settle to make comfortable to the past good-bye. like moisture of hope beyond the fantasy of the third dimension of life. God bledd 11 Sep 2015 by antonio liao | Reply picture of Angel mia LOVE xWonderfully penned my dear wise friend tfs xoxoxo xoxoxo xoxoxo blessings 11 Sep 2015 by Angel mia LOVE | Reply picture of Elena S(*_*) xBeautiful, wise and deep! Excellent choice of words, thank you! 18 Sep 2015 by Elena S(*_*) | Reply
These sort of nightmares is a result of an apprehension in our subconscious mind, which can foresee some bad time or destruction ahead and thus cautioning us with this gloomy obscurity. Very thoughtful write and enlightening one.
Obstructive mind! With the muse of the nature of things around. Nice work.
Sir, let us pray for peace and a cessation to all our nightmares. Thanks for sharing this poem.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Outstanding oeuvre.....10