Mahfooz Ali

Rookie - 21 Points (28 October / Lucknow (U.P.) India)

****on The Brink Of......**** - Poem by Mahfooz Ali

A wicked way the wind blows strong,
tighten the craft and strengthen the tie.
Ripping the sheets from the line does the
wind torment?

Stay the course,
though the waves rise high,
through the storm will the dawn arrive?
With the break of dawn will tomorrow come,
the rise of tomorrow will bring a new beginning?


Comments about ****on The Brink Of......**** by Mahfooz Ali

  • Rookie Kavya Manjusha (8/14/2009 3:55:00 PM)

    Good choice of words for the situation...
    yaa..morning days are here again...la la la
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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, July 27, 2009


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