Once apon a time
I believed you loved me
and that was my mistake
Once Apon a time
you said we would
last forever
but we only lasted for never
Why did i believe
you
why did i fall for you
nobody knows but
me and the thing
is it confuses me
too
So now i know
not to fall for you
and now i know
not to love you
but i still do
In this world nothing is forever....nice thoughts...nice flow of words. -SG x
Although it seems a sad poem but the rhyme and the words are chosen perfectly to make a beautiful poem like this, but I see that you have to write about happiness and hope your write will be awesome, anyway I enjoyed reading this magnificent poem :)
I like reading your work but I encourage you to reflect more on positive and not hurting yourself. Many will say it good to write about pain that may be true but I often worry about the reality of it. You have a life to live good for but continue to write and vary your style more. It may even bring you a bit of piece or happiness. In this sad world, it is nice to try to focus on things that are more positive. J. L. Price
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Your words are strong. It rarely happens where a relationship lasts forever. In your case, I hope you stay strong and never give into hate.