Linda Ori

Rookie - 40 Points (08/13/1945 / UTAH)

' One Bright Star


One bright star in the vast unknown
A blazing ember in the night sky shone
Reminding me that I'm not alone...............
One bright star;

One bright star in the evening sky
Holds its own where the angels fly
Anchors the bond between you and I............
One bright star;

One bright star that I wish upon
The first to rise when the sun is gone
Lights my way 'til the early dawn.............
One bright star;

One bright star In the midnight blue
Holds the dreams that I dream of you
Take my hand and I'll lead you to
One bright star.


10/18/2009

Submitted: Monday, October 19, 2009

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  • Silver Star - 3,363 Points Rajesh Thankappan (1/31/2015 2:52:00 AM)

    A messiah of glad tidings is that one bright star. A brilliant poem though I discovered your poems belatedly. So you are to me that one bright star shining brilliantly in the realm of poetry. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie T McH (10/27/2009 6:52:00 AM)

    The brightest of stars you are, L.... and you lead many of us to such light. t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Shashendra Amalshan (10/22/2009 10:55:00 AM)

    Hey Congrats indeed! ! you have written 300 poems...

    This is such a divine poem. your poem is like a ride to heaven. Hey can you really take me to a star? .. I would love to go. This is very nice..

    Love
    Shan (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,462 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/20/2009 11:02:00 PM)

    P.S........Belated Congratulations on another poetic benchmark, here on PH...

    ...................C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S...ON 3 0 0...P O E M S.................

    _______________________________F j R_______________________________ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,462 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/20/2009 11:01:00 PM)

    P.S........Belated Congratulations on another poetic benchmark, here on PH...

    ...................C O N G R A T U L A T I O N S...ON 3 0 0...P O E M S.................

    _______________________________F j R_______________________________ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 32,462 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (10/20/2009 10:58:00 PM)

    Melodious penning, Ms. Midnight...Structurally smooth as satin. As David H. alluded to, and i must concur with...Indeed we all do want that one bright star...the one whose shimmer carries hapiness & peace of mind....There are millions of multitudes of these celestial bodies above us....Enough for each and everyone of us to own as ours....And tht's what ''Wishing'' is all about, right?

    F j R
    <09> (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 144 Points Nimal Dunuhinga (10/20/2009 10:05:00 AM)

    If this Lone star is multiplicative? (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,240 Points David Harris (10/19/2009 11:32:00 AM)

    Linda, we all need that one bright star to build our dream upon. Top marks and thanks for sharing this with us.
    Hugs David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Kempson (10/19/2009 2:31:00 AM)

    How we need those bright stars 10 Daniel Hope it continues to burn for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Daniel Kempson (10/19/2009 2:30:00 AM)

    How we need those bright stars 10 Daniel Hope it continues to burn for you. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 508 Points Ramesh T A (10/19/2009 1:06:00 AM)

    Indeed one Star is a great comfort when one is alone! It reminds me of my poem, That Midnight Star! True! (Report) Reply

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