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One more time, before I die

One more time before I die,
I'd like to walk with you.
To gaze up at your clear blue sky,
Like something fresh and new.

One more time before I die,
To behold your snow capped peaks.
To see the ravens as they fly,
With sidewinders in their beaks.

One more time before I die,
I'd walk your burning sands.
To hear the wind and to reply,
Oh that would be so grand.

One more time before I die,
I'd spend a night with you.
To hear coyotes when they cry,
That's what I'd like to do.

7/19/12 Alton Texas

Submitted: Thursday, July 19, 2012
Edited: Thursday, July 19, 2012


Poet's Notes about The Poem

If thee hast liveth in the great mojave desert as thy humble servant hast.
Then, thou knowest, of which I speak.

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  • Joseph Anderson (8/26/2012 3:37:00 PM)

    I sure want to go with you.A great flowing song of nature's beauty.Though a lament this was a joyful
    tribute to read. Just a beaut.

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  • Eric Cockrell (7/27/2012 1:15:00 PM)

    the true value of life in the beauties beheld... Juan, this is a hell of a good poem!

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  • Cynthia Buhain-Baello (7/26/2012 10:13:00 PM)

    Vivid images of a very beautiful scenery, no wonder you love it so much.

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  • Heather Wilson (7/19/2012 5:41:00 PM)

    A beautiful poem, ..hope you have many, many years for your wishes to come true.

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/19/2012 12:59:00 PM)

    Beautiful write Juan, but I hope you will have a good many more than one more time. Sounds like a wonderful place to be.

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  • Smoky Hoss (7/19/2012 11:00:00 AM)

    Amen brother, me also.

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