One Should Not Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

One Should Not

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Why some one should feel unequal
When god has sent us on earth as equal
We might have been born to rich
But is that curse or beyond reach?

Human being is entitled to love
Live with peace and believe
With his unequivocal faith
Till he enjoys his last till the death

How does it matter with color?
What has it to do with honor?
Why black color becomes matter of joke?
Matter of hatred and to receive all master strokes?

Life is after all life and so precious
It must go on uninterrupted and continuous
We have no right to disturb it in any sense
To love or to hate is just nonsense

We are sent here to live and propagate
His message and spread it to relate
His importance and how it can be related to human being
It is applicable to all whether black or white, poor or king

Let us not hide behind any wall
To mislead the people and make it to look tall
Do that thing only which gives comfort
Maintains dignity and good level of rapport

Why do we look at stars when they are far?
Why do we need solution from liars
Why not we ask our own conscience?
Just be to your self in his presence

Do you need to hear it is for particular person?
Is there anything particular with reasons?
If no, then believe it is all not needed
Any advice, if given, must not be heeded

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 14 November 2012

Why some one should feel unequal When god has sent us on earth as equal We might have been born to rich But is that curse or beyond reach?

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 16 November 2012

Ahmad SorgenFrei interesting face- Chinese african, maybe survivor of Atlantis? 10 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Sabeen Rashid, Farouk Umar and 2 others like this. Sabeen Rashid Okay, now that got me too... it was a beautiful emotional experience going through this poem... Every right word that I could feel and connect with...cliched though, but holds true any day....God couldn't be present everywhere, so He created MOMMIES! ! Loved this poem! 37 minutes ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Seen by 9 Kabeer Katariya likes this. Kabeer Katariya written with an unique purity! 11 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Laura Grillo Laveglia I so agree with you that we should all treat each other equal! ! ! 11 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 15 November 2012

Muazzama Ali Shah Nice suggestions presented in your poem. I agree with you. In the last line of the poem, advise should be advicebecause you've used it as noun, rest everything is okay. 8 hours ago via mobile · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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