Far from my mind
You came to visit me.
One word.
One moment.
Turned a thousand deeds
Whether real
Or imagined
Into nothing.
In one moment of missing you
I found that
I still cared.
One word
Was all that I heard.
The repetition of the 'one word' is haunting here Jim - and we are carried into the realm of realisation, with you, of caring lots more than we thought - - through the 'one word'. Strongly put together in short lines but with punch in each one.
Another deep meaningful poem Sir James Timothy Jarrett. Happy Sweetest Day! Linda
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This does work! Sitting there on the edges of our senses. A great translucent poem. Adeline