Only Desire Will Not Work Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Only Desire Will Not Work

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Only desire will not give good start
Feel from inner depth and start
Poetry and emotions start with tears
That speaks of your anguish to bear

Make those feeling to be heard in words
Do nothing and wait for blessings from the lord
Words have powerful impact
That makes you to cry with skill and art

You need no pen and paper
That may be like words on water
It may go away with one fresh wave
Nothing will remain in mind for others to behave

Inject emotions that must look real
Undergone with sufferings while making deal
It may then be felt by others same as you
This is principle when you are writing true

You need not ask how they feel about poems
Let it come in form of few words by them
Simple acceptance of facts may certainly make the space
You may then have satisfaction with bright shine on face

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 August 2012

Only desire will not give good start Feel from inner depth and start

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Sheri Moroe8 hours ago This is so true, Words are like water, a wild crashing wave of emotions that spill from your soul onto the paper. Well written. Comment +2 cool

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Lavon Ford8 hours ago nice

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

Gabriel Mican8 hours ago well done Comment +1 Well done!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 24 August 2012

You put your heart into this Tim Murray8 hours ago Your work has real substance. You hold nothing back, and I respect that. Comment +1 very good poem

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Knight Fizzstorm 23 August 2012

Excellent poem sir. Much valuable knowledge you give to share.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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