Open Poem by Isabelle Cote

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Rating: 5.0


Can you tell me why you do these things?
Can you easily tell me the reason...
hate
seemingly
distress
obviously
pain
subconsciously
Can you explain to me why you feel the need
to bring me down
to make me suffer
with your ever-distraught glances
your greedy stares
and your anxious expression
The expression seems like home
A place to hide
Your hiding place
Come out of your hiding place
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P.S. I know this isn't one of my best and probably not the best idea to publish it as my first poem, but i was feeling a lot and i needed to let it out.
Thank you.

Isabelle Cote xoxo

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Fiona Davidson 12 May 2009

Wonderful opening poem Isabelle...I like the way the flow speeds up towards the end...well done you...lets see some more in the future....10+++

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Jessica Robert 11 May 2009

My besties got sommeeeeeee talent: D Luv it hunnnnnieeeeee: Dx2 Like i do 4 ALLLLL ur wonderful work that i hope others will get 2 c 2 Lots of Luv Darling! -Jesssssss <3

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