Open sight
Confide to today
And seek the way
That shall take you to tomorrow
With lot more things to follow
Keep no past in sight
But take lessons right
Repeat no mistakes
And rightly stake
You may like many things
But try to bring
Only those colors
That can bring honor
The future shall be bright
And much to the delight
With feeling so upright
You are on the open sight
So it belongs
And longs
As your true dream
In the form of light beam
Take lessons right.... cingrats on being selected....
An excellent Open Sight poem, torturing the self whole night, to present this comment IF it´s alright. Congratulations for being chosen as Member Poem Of the Day, Mr. Hasmukh! I have enjoyed a very lot! A 10 and much much more for the vote. You have created 17692 poems, WOW!
Excellent advice here: repeat no mistakes! Till today, you have published here on PH 17.692 poems. Now is my WOW, doubled. Thank you for sharing this very enjoyable poem, Mr. Hasmukh!
A motivational piece of work sir..... thanks for sharing
Truly inspirational! Full of wisdom. Excellent write! Hasmukh, Congratulations on Poem Of The Day!
Open sight Confide to today And seek the way That shall take you to tomorrow With lot more things to follow- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - Only those colors- - - - - - A lovely write about poetry- - Being open to insight we can find wonderful ways that can bring honor to our lives.
Loaded with lovely lessons is this positive poem! Well done my friend!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Congrats on poem of the day! A very interesting poem.