Open Up Freely Before Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Open Up Freely Before

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Sunday,22nd July 2018

It is but natural
when an individual fails
he tried to avail of
the divine path

when it becomes intolerable
even after so much of the struggle
the only option left is surrender to the god
and reduce the mental load

it is a useful way
to shed away
the tears in grief
and express the belief

nothing wrong
when you repent along
with the mass
and prove genuine class

any man will break down
if curses fall on
and he is not in the position to face
so he goes to seek blessings

Hasmukh Amathalal Mehta

Open Up Freely Before
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Shiju H. Pallithazheth This is a very well matured and amazingly written beautiful lines Hasmukh 👌👏❤️ 1 Manage Like · Reply · 11h · Edited

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