luciana isabelle

Rookie (9 february 1993 / france)

Open your EYES


Open your eyes
To see the world
To see the future
To see the people

Open your eyes
And you might seek
The similarity
The differences
And the changes

Open your eyes
So that you can think
Deeply
Without any mistakes
Without any failure

Open your eyes
And ask
Why?
What?
How?
To let yourself
Be your TRUESELF
Forever…

Submitted: Sunday, June 30, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Open your EYES by luciana isabelle )

  • Bronze Star - 6,050 Points Khairul Ahsan (4/16/2014 7:32:00 PM)

    The note is something special! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 41 Points Jr Cuyam (10/16/2013 1:40:00 AM)

    this is beautiful. we need to open our eyes for us to see deeply and understand things. good write friend Luci (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 6,050 Points Khairul Ahsan (8/18/2013 6:10:00 PM)

    A well written poem.
    Open your eyes....:
    To let yourself
    Be your TRUESELF
    Forever…
    A good advice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Luciana Isabelle (8/17/2013 12:00:00 PM)

    mohamad khosravi: thanks for the suggestion....appreciated it so much! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mohammad Khosravi (8/16/2013 6:02:00 PM)

    Great. i Love this Style of Poems So. and i think it can be better if u USE nature instead world. and picture instead of people.
    like it:
    Open your eyes
    To see the future
    To see the nature
    To see the picture (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 121 Points Indranil Bhaduri (7/8/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    Lovely write...keep going (Report) Reply

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