Jodie Hardy

Rookie - 46 Points (Halifax)

Our Love - Poem by Jodie Hardy

Your eyes glistening as does the ocean on a summer's day
Rain falls around us, you enfold me in your leather coat
Time stops as you hold me in your arms and time stops
Ten years or so have passed and here we are still
Together, eyes' glistening as the rain falls around us
Your eyes glistening as the ocean does on a summer's day
Our life is children's laughter and never-ending summer's days


Comments about Our Love by Jodie Hardy

  • Rookie - 341 Points Beach Girl (8/28/2013 9:34:00 PM)

    Beautiful and romantic! Love the 'Rain falls around us, you enfold me in your leather coat'. Just this phrase transmits so many senses, sight, touch, smell and sound. Lovely! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,023 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/28/2013 5:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful poem on Our Love.. Life's beautiful moments are captured and refreshing those memories keep it alive, even after many years.. Loved it Jodie. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 347 Points David Wood (8/28/2013 4:48:00 AM)

    A beautiful love poem of the highest order. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 4,662 Points Patricia Grantham (8/27/2013 10:00:00 PM)

    Very beautiful and passionate lines on love. Wrapped up in the arms
    of each other with the look of love. Two lovers with lots of emotions.
    Please read my poem A lovers Stroll. Enjoyed your write. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/18/2013 9:42:00 AM)

    a nice read about love. our life is children's laughter and never ending summer days. nice thought (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (8/18/2013 9:42:00 AM)

    a nice read about love. our life is children's laughter and never ending summer days. nice thought (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, August 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, October 27, 2014


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