hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 66,573 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Our Own Nest - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Cuckoo made me to rise
It was no surprise
But daily routine
O thin of the day and feel fine

The sun rays were source of inspiration
I used to think about energy and its relation
What was hidden in that powerful beam?
I only thought of powerful creator and Him

'To feel or fall in love' is great thing
You can not miss it for something
It needs great care to handle
Life is not run with hurdles

I was forced to keep mum
As situation compelled to maintain calm
I thought of going it with caution
She too was taking enough of precaution

We hand thing mind
We need not bother about world unkind
We need to carve out our own nest
To live happily with no more tests


Comments about Our Own Nest by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:38:00 AM)

    Nice
    16 minutes ago by Seema Chowdhury | Reply (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 8:38:00 AM)

    good write.

    Peter Murphy44 minutes ago
    The odd spelling error. But good.
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  • Gold Star - 66,573 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/24/2014 7:31:00 AM)

    Cuckoo made me to rise
    It was no surprise (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 24, 2014

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 24, 2014


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