Manonton Dalan

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Pacing My Way


pretty girl came to talk to me
she said everything came okay
she hold on my shoulder with
assuring look; i don't have to
worry but wait she's waking up
i know she's very brave, fighter

i see people leaving now late
we were just two of us left
air con is getting cooler than
it should, maybe more warm bodies
to absorb coolness, pale walls
watching every move, am included

Submitted: Thursday, July 25, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013
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