Paddle Me In The Rough Sea's Poem by Antonio Liao

Paddle Me In The Rough Sea's

Rating: 5.0


whew...w...whew....w...whew....w...so strong, wave beneath
in the high sea, take in the ocean floor, dive all the wind that
brings me near to the bottom vail, and show me the ocean rock
saddle in the sand it fall

blow... s..s..blow...s..s...blow..s..s..that never ends the wave
that rough me inn, in my boat makes it pain, from the distance
there i see again, will and determination give me hope in a
land i wish to stand

roll on so fast, days and night, is counted in vast land, i can see
where my boat paddling in the deep blue sea, and everything is
done when my strength is gone, all i need now is go beyond my
fear that holds me to be there

paddle my wish near to place i quest, in the rough sea's i passed
i leave my past... for the future i stand... paddle me so fast......
that i can take it last......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brian Jani 15 May 2014

Antonio nice poem I enjoyed it

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Kesav Easwaran 03 September 2008

a boat fighting out on the life ocean rough waves to reach that ultimate shore of eternal love...and a request to the Dependable Shore Owner to paddle up safe...good insightful write Anto...well presented 10/10

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