My passion has faded away, my dreams have dimmed
When I was li'l, life was easy, it seemed.
Growing up it gets tougher- -
We get to know the true meanings of struggle & suffer.
Even when we try to reach out, we get to grab no hand,
Friendship happens to be as uncertain as building castle of sand.
Adulthood is difficult, it makes us tough to fight,
Every situation seems so dark, even in bright daylight.
Yes, Ma'am. Growing up is tough. Its a big struggle where one learns oneself and yearns one's respect. It gets tougher when we find it difficult to identify a friend or a foe. As a write it is extremely good, subtle use of words, and very good rhyming. Really conveys the emotions too..Wonderful Ma'am!
True, we have to face lot of challenges when we are grown up.
An apt right when we all step into the field of struggle...but hope persists and life goes on... Good write.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Childhood is the best time in one's life. As we grow up, we meet challenges. Some we can overcome, some we cannot. This is life. The poem has good rhyme, good flow of words. I would not like to call the challenges of growing up as 'pain', though.