moves the dale
and the soul -
a painting
good concept...nice presentation...forget the last missing syllable...good haiku...hicupped! 10
Although a good concept, it is not the proper format for haiku. Haiku contains three lines: 5 syllables 7 syllables 5 syllables Just combine the last 3 lines and add another with 5 syllables!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a wonderful painting moves the soul of 100's..lovely 1..! !