Chandrashekar a posy poet

Rookie - 22 Points (June 12,1973 / Bangalore, India)

Paradise Of Fantasies, The - Poem by Chandrashekar a posy poet

At times,
You excite me so much
And many a time
Deeply hurt me too
Throwing up surprises
Is no strange for you
And smart enough for
Deeds melancholy

Still I wait in vain
For the moment of magic
Through myriad touches
And it's great to feel such
Immense sighs of relief

You fill
Brimming courage
To sail through life
And take me round
The layers of choke
You chuckle me often
And puzzle me too

The sense of rhythm
In every swing
With varied angles
And countless heights

You pass through lungs
And cheer them up
You keep them high
And make them fly

With stunning beauty
You thrill my sight
And naughty enough
To make me gay

You haunt me
As an Eagle in sky
And soak me well with
The paradise of fantasies

You move my soul
And often
Prove your role

Well, in case
You fail to emote
Any of these
Then for sure
You are never
My ardent verse

Comments about Paradise Of Fantasies, The by Chandrashekar a posy poet

  • Rookie Chitra - (4/12/2009 10:02:00 AM)

    exotic, heart warming and soul stirring
    Sir, thank you for sharing (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 81 Points Laron Green Sr. (4/11/2009 1:22:00 AM)

    nice job it have a mean nice (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 15 Points Eyan Desir (4/10/2009 10:17:00 AM)

    Good flow
    I kind of
    got lose in the poem
    But its was good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 133 Points Allemagne Roßmann (4/10/2009 9:14:00 AM)

    Fantastic...i love the flow..10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (4/10/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    a fantastic write with excellent flow and beauty....10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 71 Points Indira Babbellapati (4/10/2009 7:59:00 AM)

    rendezvous with your lady muse...interesting! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (4/10/2009 4:55:00 AM)

    The ardent verse, the inspiration of lives and fantancy of creative minds must always give paradise? ? ? Great imagery here........Thanks! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie rago rago (4/10/2009 3:07:00 AM)

    A fantastic write each line carries value.........and it is exotic.....surprises always there not only in love but in life too...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Barry A. Lanier (4/10/2009 1:25:00 AM)

    layer upon layer of fantazical stimulation from apparently the subjects fantasy love or otherwise real one, , , , , , (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Dr Hitesh Sheth (4/9/2009 11:18:00 PM)

    praise of verses in word terse.....good write.......... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, April 9, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, November 22, 2012

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