Paradox (Monoku) Poem by Bipasha Dutt
Paradox (Monoku)
In this impermanent life - we are struggling with some permanent pain.
Hi Bipasha, I love this Monoku format very much as it is very challenging.....undoubtedly you have excelled...thank you- -10
Wonderful expression in its utter brevity. Liked it.5 stars.
Poignant rendition of words set aside for sober reflection. A thought provoking poem. Thanks for sharing.
The 'Now' when pain is present, does seem permanent. Nicely conceived and written.
Brilliant is the only word that comes to mind when reading this monoku.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Hi Bipasha, Very profound thought. Expressed in just a handful words. Lovely. Congrats for this very classy post.
Thank you for all your encouragement :)