Patience Poem by Viola Grey

Patience

Rating: 5.0


Patience
is the hope I breathe
as one more day
bows to the moon.
Time is my master,
keys grasped tightly
in it's hardened grip.
Unlocking my cage
is...not yet an option
as I remain a prisoner
to Patience.

19/6/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Wells 30 June 2008

At last! Someone worthy of the title 'POET'. (Not that I consider myself one of course! ! !) I'm loving your stuff.

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Emancipation Planz 24 June 2008

A proper poem... how do people do that! ! ! ! ! I love it...10derly... it is the language of concisenesss... aroha... PS I wouldn't worry... as you lay them over your turning will make them come...*smiles*

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