Are You Just Another Dream Poem by Viola Grey

Are You Just Another Dream

Rating: 3.6


Have you faded into another day,
only to linger with the night
where a thousand dancing dreams
kiss your brow.

I think daily of your smile,
imagine it's depth touching green eyes
as upon my eager mouth
your stare hungrily remains.

Towards each night I stumble,
barely managing to steady my feet
as they quickly - too quickly-
run into tomorrow.

You can never rush fate,
it's pace breathes by it's own beat,
and what we get, we know
we were always meant to gain.

So - with this in mind, I sleep,
as dancing dreams lean
towards my sun wearied brow
and administer their kiss.

17/8/08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Dugan 17 August 2008

wow that was beautiful and very well written im favoriting it to my poem list

0 0 Reply
Thad Wilk 17 August 2008

A tender and capturing write, your lingering, dancing dreams - delight! *10*! ! A splendid read Viola! Best wishes, Friend Thad

0 0 Reply
Vidyadhar Durgekar 17 August 2008

Yeah it is a dream like existence itself is a illusory dream good poem................

0 0 Reply
Kris Smith 18 August 2008

This poem is full of hope and light for me, dream your dreams and realise them Chris x 10

0 0 Reply
Joe M.-M. 18 August 2008

Beautiful, a stage whisper, the most important part of the song is the softest spoken, and your economy of words has led me to your meaning: very straight forward, seldom seen.... and well named I might add.

0 0 Reply
Bullion Grey 03 April 2009

This morning I woke early to see the sunrise and the cloudy skys, only to perchance read this poem. Dreams kiss your brow, day fade away, only to begin on the marrow. This reading left me happy of your work, yes I think it is true we are just another dream, , , , , thank you. BG

0 0 Reply
Sonya Florentino 11 March 2009

without dreams I don't know if i'd ever get through life..... so i know what it feels....

0 0 Reply
*Trusting You* 27 December 2008

You can never rush fate, it's pace breathes by it's own beat, really cool lines...I love it Viola... this is great... you are a awesome writer! ! ! great job.Becca

0 0 Reply
<font color=black>Nagourta 01 November 2008

Your style brings me good recall...

0 0 Reply
Dustin Harold 01 November 2008

full of clouded passion my dear, totally wicked... you satisfy my mind

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success