Perfection Poem by kimber harrison

Perfection

Rating: 5.0


I'm crazy, fun, and cool, but not perfect.
My life is spent doing the things I want,
but it's not perfect.
My faith in God is the size of a mustard seed,
but is perfect.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Callie Valentine 21 April 2009

Mhm, I can certainly relate to this. God's all that's perfect. But this poem's pretty close to perfect. ;)

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Brianna Trombley 06 December 2008

compared to most peoples faith, the size of a mustard seed isnt as small as it seems, nice write

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... and out of seeds, great oak trees grow. Or something like that. A gem of a piece. t x

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Ian Bowen 04 May 2008

Nice poem, well penned. Ian

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