It is imagined
About some lines
That men always wear false smile
And go for hunt meanwhile
Only mother’s and sister’s relation
Can be with no equation
But to find one permanent
Presence of mind and needs thrust constant
It is some what a need
We all must heed
Life and age go together
So we need some one as partner
Love and lust two sides of the coin
One goes after it with lots of fun
Finds in fix with unbearable pain
Yet it is preferred with no gain
Let us care
For sentiments
Its movement
And for leisurely moments
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Mehta Sir, this is a splendid poem and the last para' is captivating! Chandra Thiagarajan, Chennai Jun 21,2013
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Eugene Pacifico3 minutes ago Where the author expresses confusion about men and behavioral tendencies that are always not very welcome, but in its movement for sentiments in leisurely moments together is to let us care.
Emotions and relationships vargus pike3 minutes ago I liked the way the poem opened but then the rhymes became forced and heavy. I thought the rhythm was solid and the message was clear. Comment +1 Sentiments of relationshiips
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Permanent It is imagined About some lines That men always wear false smile And go for hunt meanwhile