Risha Ahmed (12 yrs)

(21/8/1998 / Cochin(India))

Pizza-What a Treat


A slice of pizza is loved
By my whole family
It is the best and testiest snack
That ever there could be
From the vegetables and cheese
To the tip of the crust
To have a bite of pizza
Truly is a must
I mostly love the pizza
Which are made by my mum
You just can’t ignore it
You have to taste some
I really love pizza
I eat every crumb
And then have some cold drink
Till my tummy is numb
But now I am grumbling
Because that pizza
Is right now being eaten
By my sister, Fiza.

Submitted: Wednesday, April 25, 2007
Edited: Thursday, February 17, 2011

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  • David Harris (5/6/2007 4:05:00 PM)

    Risha, I'm not a lover of Pizza myself, never got the taste for them. However this is a lovely little poems about them and your last line made me smile. Loved it. Thanks for sharing it Princess. Top marks from me.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Mary Das (5/4/2007 5:33:00 AM)

    Good description of pizza. I love vegetarian pizza. Once in a while it should be okay. (Report) Reply

  • Melanie Ann Calvert (5/2/2007 5:27:00 PM)

    I think that's the best description of pizza I've ever heard, and I live in the pizza capital of Italy! ! ! ... but now you've made me hungry and the pizzerias are all shut...! (Report) Reply

  • Beach Glass (4/25/2007 11:19:00 PM)

    Keep it up little one, you are writing some excellent poetry for one so young. Umm, now I'm hungry too! ** BL ** (Report) Reply

  • Dr. A.celestine Raj Manohar Md (4/25/2007 10:11:00 PM)

    A Pizza, once in a way,
    is OK!
    Your Pizza poem was a very good theme for a budding, young poet.
    You can do some changes and make your pizza
    look really delicious, energising and attractive!
    At the moment, your pizza looks quite good
    Because, its made by your mother,
    as lovely as she could!
    Good work, Risha,
    Dr John Celes
    PS.Doctors don't recommend Pizzas! (Report) Reply

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