Let me make a punch
Of flower and heart
A petal's charm dumped
By the wasp’s lust
So many things happen so many ways
Forgot to spur the treasures
To spread in the air, petal’s fate
Let me take a chance
Let me bring a live verse.
10/11/08
imaginative mind has the ability to create anything live from possible dead ends...as in the case of Mousumi's this write...the last line is challenging and hence appreciably refreshing...10
Simplicity..but defines clearly! ! Nice choice of words. A real poetry in coffin...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
outstanding....khub bhalo laglo....shyamal