Poetic Amoure

Rookie - 0 Points (nov 14 / Detroit)

Poetry Night - Poem by Poetic Amoure

stop playing like you love when you really dont,
stop playing like you gone do when you really wont.
a bunch of temptation no inspiration,
gotta rest up for what there's no celebration.
no one has sympathy, no one cares,
and if no one cares why in the world are we here.
friends going through things that i cant help em though,
im going through things and my friend is too.
the rope to heaven is right there but i cant latch on,
the train is right infront but i cant catch on.
Im tryna help but i cant seem to get it right,
so once its all said n dont i welcome you to poetry night

Comments about Poetry Night by Poetic Amoure

  • Rookie - 118 Points Ebi Robert (7/8/2011 11:18:00 AM)

    I like the flow of words, really great i must say. (Report) Reply

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  • Bronze Star - 2,778 Points Dorothy- A. Holmes (7/4/2011 4:14:00 AM)

    Love the passion of your poem...Be strong!

    Dorothy Alves Holmes
    A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Urshula Davis (6/13/2011 12:10:00 PM)

    Girl i'm feelin this i can also relate! ! Man this world crazy! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Elizabeth Fletcher (6/11/2011 6:05:00 AM)

    I loved your poem. All of what you said was honest and real. It was raw feeling without hesitation. That was awsome :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Hilton Ball (6/6/2011 12:34:00 PM)

    ahhh i like the way you write i think i will write a poem just for you rite now thanks for the insperation (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, June 1, 2011

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 7, 2011

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