Poetic Amoure

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Obsessed completely

thinking of you completely same parts and all
but i have a feeling you wouldnt let me fall.
obsessed with you obsessed with your body,
so maybe this is obssessed with you.
im tryna finish this out,
so im here without you.and i cant let this go
i need us to grow, i want you and you want me but your friends,
keep getting in the way, but i guess my feelings will have to wait another day

Submitted: Friday, September 23, 2011
Edited: Tuesday, September 27, 2011

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  • Rookie Stefanie Fontker (9/25/2011 10:01:00 AM)

    I don't know who rated this a one, but I certainly don't agree with them. Keep on writing, you have a knack for poetry. (Report) Reply

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