Yes, quite powerful. You've created a LOT of intensity in a few lines. You've really painted the nature of that kind of obsession.
I wonder WHY he's poison, of course. Don't know that you need to answer in this poem.
Such a paradox, you've dramatized it so well.
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Yes, quite powerful. You've created a LOT of intensity in a few lines. You've really painted the nature of that kind of obsession. I wonder WHY he's poison, of course. Don't know that you need to answer in this poem. Such a paradox, you've dramatized it so well.