Ponytail Fascination Poem by Khairul Ahsan

Ponytail Fascination

Rating: 5.0


I didn't see her face,
Or figure,
Just saw a flash of her hair
From the back.

I didn't see anything else, but
Her hair neatly pulled away
From the front to the back,
Clipped by a hair tie.

Just that, just that much!
It hung like a black pony tail.
Since then, I am a great fan
Of ponytails, whoever wears them.


Dhaka
16 October 2020

Friday, October 16, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: beauty
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yiyan Han 16 October 2020

Ummm you aren't alone. Imagination attracts.

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Khairul Ahsan 12 November 2020

@Yiyan Han, Thanks for the comment. Glad to have a second person who thinks alike.

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Kostas Lagos 16 October 2020

Yes, I agree! Ponytails are great. This poem too

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Khairul Ahsan 12 November 2020

Thanks for thinking alike, and appreciating the poem, @Kostas Lagos.

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Lyn Paul 16 October 2020

An interesting fascination. Ponytails are everywhere in Australia. Sport, schools and lack of time. Let me tell you Khairul, it is fine if men have them too.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 24 October 2020

An interesting and fascinating poem. Our style and manner of dressing, how we fix ourselves or our grooming can affect people's behavior and promote awareness. Beautiful poem crafted with ease and cleverness..Loved it. Five Stars! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 October 2020

Just that, just that much! It hung like a black pony tail. Since then, I am a great fan Of ponytails, whoever wears them.......beautiful lines inside love is hidden. Beautifully penned. Five stars.

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Valsa George 21 October 2020

I too am a fan of pony tails and now wear a pony tail after cutting my long hair which I used to plait earlier! A cute poem creating a kind of curiosity to know who was the person wearing it......!

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Bri Edwards 21 October 2020

i laughed softly at the last line. How about on a pony? ? :) bri

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Anil Kumar Panda 18 October 2020

Wah! ! So nice. You have fallen in love with pony tail. Sometimes girls wear their hair as pony tails and look so cute. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

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