Shahzia Batool

Freshman - 715 Points (Pakistan)

Pope Sir, apologies! Poem by Shahzia Batool


Once upon a time
there was a Girl
with shining deep eyes
and heart like a pearl.
Enamored as she was
of pleasures of her life
she always captured hearts
she never tried to hurl.
Being a gorgeous nymph
her grace excelled the moon
nothing was so nice
as her favorite pretty curl.
Neither dazzling eyes
nor her scarlet lips
her locks captivated
the heart of an earl.
Since that moment he
was robbed of his rest
and started thinking plans
to gain the precious curl.
So frightened as she was
of vision of a dream
by which she got alarmed
to beware of a numskull.
Her dream came true
and she lost her pretty lock
she shivered, quivered, wept
in loss began to whirl.
so this was the story
Of a pretty girl,
of an Earl's passions
and a slaughtered curl.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 26, 2013
Edited: Thursday, July 25, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

Based on 'The Rape Of The Lock', a mock-epic by Alexander Pope!

Comments about this poem (Pope Sir, apologies! by Shahzia Batool )

  • Rookie - 37 Points Shihabudheen K J (7/4/2013 7:08:00 AM)

    great lines dear poet.............grace adds beauty to soul and ever shine without absorbed by hard realities of life...having lost the grace her dreams are slaughtered, half of live made hell, and much more like that.....keep it up....deep insights (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 469 Points Yasmeen Khan (7/2/2013 1:58:00 PM)

    I could recall the famous literary masterpiece through your craftily written composition. The choice of diction well depicts Belinda's character. Well-done Shahzia! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (7/1/2013 10:36:00 AM)

    It must be you that were this girl. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (6/29/2013 2:05:00 PM)

    Oh now abstract is here, very integral attempt (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 2 Points Lasoaphia Quxazs (6/27/2013 2:28:00 PM)

    This is life, many is loosing the curl, but that is the life it goes on and that is it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Passionate Reader (6/27/2013 1:13:00 PM)

    It's a CUTE attempt and i really enjoyed! ! ! :) the whole description is so beautiful infact picturesque and the use of diction is just admirable! ! ! ;) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 208 Points R.j. Wynn (6/27/2013 12:24:00 PM)

    Pretty poem girl, thanks for stopping by. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 715 Points Shahzia Batool (6/27/2013 12:18:00 PM)

    @ Ms.Valsa George & Ms. Valerie Dohren: yes, she is Belinda who considered the breach to her apparent beauty graver than her integrity, and yes, the curl metaphor was decoded as virginity by S.E.Hyman in 20th century. Your substantial visits to my world are truly appreciated. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,194 Points Valerie Dohren (6/27/2013 11:43:00 AM)

    Very good Shahzia, is the curl a metaphor for her virginity? That's how I read it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 339 Points David Wood (6/27/2013 4:59:00 AM)

    A clever adaptation Shahzia. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sun Shine (6/27/2013 1:21:00 AM)

    hmm, a supplement of the poem by Pope Sir :) what an address! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,313 Points Valsa George (6/27/2013 12:02:00 AM)

    Was that girl by the name Belinda? Like Alexander Pope's Belinda, did she consider this breach to her appearance graver than a breach to her integrity? A skillful adaptation of a renowned mock epic! (Report) Reply

Read all 12 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Daffodils, William Wordsworth
  2. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  3. If, Rudyard Kipling
  4. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  5. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  6. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  7. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  8. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
  9. Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night, Dylan Thomas
  10. King Rama II, Sunthorn Phu
[Hata Bildir]