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Mark R Slaughter


Premeditation


Oh blade you'll warm tonight!
Awash in crimson-purple flows,
Your sheen will dull with aching flesh:
Palpating anatomic mounds
Caressing, dancing, writhing round
Your metal form-
Whetted ‘gainst a lonely bone,
Then to probe the pounding, begging heart.

And all the while the prey will howl
Before they crumple; greet the mud-
A taut and unbelieving jowl
Will open out for giving blood-
A vent from down below,
Once a brutal show
Of metal in the man.


Copyright © Mark R Slaughter 2010










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Submitted: Wednesday, March 17, 2010
Edited: Thursday, April 05, 2012

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  • Joseph Sanchez (4/28/2014 10:41:00 AM)

    Oh blade you'll warm tonight!
    Awash in crimson-purple flows,
    Your sheen will dull with aching flesh:
    Palpating anatomic mounds
    Caressing, dancing, writhing round
    Your metal form-
    Whetted ‘gainst a lonely bone,
    Then to probe the pounding, begging heart. (Report) Reply

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