hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 33,221 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Prepare A Plan - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

No one likes to be left behind
Curse alone and feel as if blind
World has moved further
And you are still no where

Such feelings do exist
When human mind insist
Evaluate and compare
Where one has failed to dare?

It is human tendency
Increases its frequency
With glitter and outer show
When compared with illusory glow

No one compares it with river water
Its natural flow is only to cater
People living on both the sides
Let there be areas large and wide

We are aware of obsolete terms
Materialistic world would never help in turn
Still we avoid and choose short cut
With lot more to suffer and nothing to talk about

We are blinded by false show
That has been thrust upon to grow
How best we reach on top?
That is only concern with no stop

Only few reaches at last stage
When time has run out of an age
Rest suffer due to weak insight
To curse the life with no room to fight

It is no crime to prepare a plan
Put everything behind or a glance
It can be succeeded by efforts and chance
One should take it seriously even at once


Comments about Prepare A Plan by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/10/2013 4:44:00 AM)

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    Very good

    Khalil Goddard19 minutes ago
    Very enjoyable to read. Well written.
    Comment +1
    interesting

    Andre Segovia19 minutes ago
    well written
    Comment +1
    Plan


    Edgar Morales-Alfaro15 minutes ago
    Nice (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Sandra M. Dorazil2 minutes ago I love the direction you went with this poem! I also love the description in this poem! Just make sure you break up certain lines with commas or periods or something, otherwise it just seems like you are going on and on! Good job otherwise! : D (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    Prepare A Plan Martin Degener8 minutes ago Awesome Work. I agree with you always have a plav Comment +1 Description! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 33,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/1/2012 12:56:00 AM)

    No one likes to be left behind
    Curse alone and feel as if blind (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, September 1, 2012



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