No one likes to be left behind
Curse alone and feel as if blind
World has moved further
And you are still no where
Such feelings do exist
When human mind insist
Evaluate and compare
Where one has failed to dare?
It is human tendency
Increases its frequency
With glitter and outer show
When compared with illusory glow
No one compares it with river water
Its natural flow is only to cater
People living on both the sides
Let there be areas large and wide
We are aware of obsolete terms
Materialistic world would never help in turn
Still we avoid and choose short cut
With lot more to suffer and nothing to talk about
We are blinded by false show
That has been thrust upon to grow
How best we reach on top?
That is only concern with no stop
Only few reaches at last stage
When time has run out of an age
Rest suffer due to weak insight
To curse the life with no room to fight
It is no crime to prepare a plan
Put everything behind or a glance
It can be succeeded by efforts and chance
One should take it seriously even at once
Sandra M. Dorazil2 minutes ago I love the direction you went with this poem! I also love the description in this poem! Just make sure you break up certain lines with commas or periods or something, otherwise it just seems like you are going on and on! Good job otherwise! : D
Prepare A Plan Martin Degener8 minutes ago Awesome Work. I agree with you always have a plav Comment +1 Description!
No one likes to be left behind Curse alone and feel as if blind
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
More Post Very good Khalil Goddard19 minutes ago Very enjoyable to read. Well written. Comment +1 interesting Andre Segovia19 minutes ago well written Comment +1 Plan Edgar Morales-Alfaro15 minutes ago Nice